Applying to some BBs and some MMs particularly interested in S&T but also IB.
I really appreciate any feedback or advice, looking to see if I have a shot with this resume and obviously for anything that could be improved.
EDIT: just saw a comma mistake in the lower part, don't worry that's not there in my actual resume it just messed up when I was taking my school name out for anonymity.
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Looks a bit empty to me. I would take one or two of your activities and write about them to fill it up the page (make it size 11 if there is not enough room afterwards)
I would also expand on the interests, it seems like you are only interested in 2 things.
OK thanks for the response, do you think I should write about them in the same style as I write about work experience?
I am in complete agreement with Lou. Write about them in the same style.
Fix the formatting on the bottom date. Fix the formatting on "Finance Societ, y". Take the comma out of "June, 2015".
This might just be a personal opinion, but I kind of have a down on people who list being the CEO of online things they created. I just think it sounds tacky. After all, why not make yourself Chairman of the Board & CEO? Also take out the "while interning and taking a full class schedule" thing. I remember those days, and those things take 50 hours a week maximum, even if the internship is working you 12 hours a day which is unlikely as it is probably not a formal internship program. No banker would be impressed that you worked 50 hours a week and still miraculously found the time to cobble a website together.
Actually, you don't even have an internship on your resume - am I missing something?
Hope that helps.
The particular internship I was referring to their was a brief stint when I was different major. The internship was in the "New Media" department and had little if anything to do with finance, it didn't seem worth writing about on there because I just spent a lot of time writing really. I guess I don't see the carry over but maybe it should be on there?
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